presentation done improvement needed!

We have done our presentation now and it seemed to be well received though some improvements were suggested one of which i was able to improve upon in the time left the others i wasn't.


one of the criticisms that was offered was that the dining room scene was very empty and needed some more detail and filling. to improve on this for the final deadline i put in a plate at each seat with knives and forks either side and i also included a bread rack in the middle of the table i feel this has improved the overall look of this scene and met the criticism it received.




the other criticisms my scenes received was for the balloon scene i was told it was slightly to long and it would of been good to have something in the back ground in the darkness, i had decided to put in a star scape by including some self illuminated star shapes of varying sizes but unfortunately i don't have enough time to change this before the hand in. i was also told that it could of been good if when the camera looks down it could see a map of Essex below which would of been good but again i didn't have enough time before hand it to do this. other then these points the whole things seemed well received and I'm proud of it.